Poetry

Pauses

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  • CREATIVE LIFE STAR

    Beatifully penned and interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

    • You’re welcome. I’m glad you enjoyed. πŸ™‚

  • nupurmaskara

    Very nice. Like the way you expanded on pauses. Needed in today’s hectic life. Am also planning to put my poems on kindle- there’s a contest on.

    • Wow! All the best for your collection. Do share the link, in case you need votes.

  • Vasantha Vivek

    Wonderfully expressed, Mansi. i too love pauses in my life and in my days. Happy to connect with you for #MyFriendAlexa !!!

  • Geethica Mehra

    Silence has its own lanuguage. It is very important to give due attention to silence in between the talks else everybody will be a talking and nobody will be listening.

    • Exactly! Life is really in these pauses and nowhere else.

  • Beautifully expressed SILENCE and its so well written

  • Aesha Shah

    Eye-opener. My thoughts keep running all the time in my mind and my words keep flowing without any pauses. I know that a pause could make a difference to my relationships and your prose poetry also made me realise that, I think I should start taking pauses.

    • Yes, life is actually in the pauses. πŸ™‚

  • it’s good to pause in life, I agree. but not pause so long that the pause begins to talk wrong things and push people farther apart. quite a nice poem. πŸ™‚

  • Deepa Malhotra Gandhi

    Beautiful Poem Mansi. I didnt know you write poetry too. Pauses are very important sometimes in life. Going too fast make sus miss some important things in life. πŸ™‚
    You should write more poetry.

    • I will write more. Do come back for more πŸ™‚

  • Keerthi Vydyula

    In this beautiful poem, You have perfectly captured how siple life can be if one really wants it to be. The importance of pause is beautifully summed up!

  • Brinda Rana

    Eloquent!! Loved it Mansi. So important to hit that pause especially in today’s ‘instant’ world. Thank you for reminding us with such a beautiful poem

  • Karuna Chauhan

    Beautiful and so apt. captures some simple yet complex meanings of life!

  • Charu Sareen Gujjal

    That’s so beautifully written. It’s so important to pause and reflect. Good luck for the poetry collection. I too have a dream of publishing my poetry collection some day.

    • Thanks! Please share your collection once you’re published.

  • Anubhuti Seth Mehn

    Nice..loved it…pauses are important to understand things..be it in life or literature..

  • Sushmita Malakar

    I so agree with you. Pauses are so necessary in life. They do talk!

    Beautiful πŸ™‚

  • Tina Sequeira

    Hi Mansi! This is my first time on your blog and the first read. Surely, coming back for more such gems. Loved the poem…itΒ΄s deceptively deep. Loved your note at the end of the poem and the Atal Bihari Vajpayee example. Keep writing such amazing poems for us, readers. Love and Cheers!

    • Thanks so much for the appreciation! Do drop by again πŸ™‚

  • Taking a pause from life hops and just enjoy the world around much in needed in today world deep thought indeed

  • Danisha Nathyal

    Hi Mansi , love the poem . complexity of life untangle in words beautiful.